Site Critique - Week 15

Site:	http://www.webuildpages.com/ Internet Marketing Services
Target:	Businesses with web pages who wish to increase their ranking in search engines such as Yahoo and Google.
Engaging/not:	Very underwhelming design. There is a grey navigation bar at the top of the page just under the logo (which is the only way to get back ‘home’ from other pages) and the links are repeated at the bottom of the page: This is a good thing since the pages are all very long and require much scrolling. There is a histogram on the home page. The bars get bigger as you go right but there is no explanation of what this represents. The whole site seems haphazard and slapdash, not what you would expect to attract serious business custom! However, the services offered are clearly laid out along with the costs.
Would want:
Would not want:	The overall effect is one of disorganization. Perhaps more pages with less blurb on each would work better? If I were an online business, this would not tempt me to hire them.